The Easter Bunny

 

Every year at Easter a bunny hides Easter eggs.They have a competion to see who can find the eggs.Whoever finds the most eggs wins the competion.There are 20 eggs.There was this one rabbit called Roger.He entered every year but never won.So his mum said to him,"If you want to win try and eat more carrots." Then Roger said,"Mum i eat 5 carrots a day and that is part of my 5 a day." So Roger entered the competion and on the day,Mr Teeth said 3...2...1 go.So all the rabbits ran and started looking for the eggs. Roger was running as fast as he could.He found one egg and kept on running.Before the race finished roger had 15 eggs.The horn went and then they counted the eggs and they shouted we have a winner.The winner is Roger.Roger was so happy.So he went home and said,"Mum Mum i won the competion."Then Roger's Mum said," Well done Roger I knew you could do it."So Roger got to hold the competions from now on.Roger always told the kid Rabbits if you want to win eat all your fruit and vegtables.

 

 

By Ryan & Sophie.

 

 

                                                JESSICA AND LUCY

NARRATOR; Jessica and lucy sit  next to eachother in class. They both have the same pencil . They always get muddled up with there pencils. So they need to think of a  solution.

 

 

JESSICA;" We need to think up a solution."

LUCY;" Yeh because i think your stealing my pencil."

JESSICA;"What can we do to  solve the problem."

LUCY;"We could always put a bit of sticky paper with our name on it."

JESSICA;"Yeah  lets do that and not fall out over our pencils."

LUCY;"Friends?".

JESSICA;"Yeah"

 

NARRATOR;Jessica and Lucy sat back down . Put sticky paper on there pencils . Then got back to work.

                        

                                                       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE MAGIC BOX

 

CHAPTER 1

 

One dark thundery morning,In the castle were nobody went and never even dared to go, there lived a vampire!!! He had sea dark eyes,huge fangs,big juicy lips and blood that poured down his face like tears. He had no children,no wife he just lived on his own. He was grumpy,lazy,sad and he hated all humans.One night he was getting ready to go in his coffin when he saw something shining. He looked away because he hated stuff ,that shine and are bright, like the sun. He tried not to go but he couldn`t resist.The shine was to bright so he covered it in one of his capes so it stopped shining in his face. He walked up to the box and opened it. When he opened it there was a big WWWWWWHHHHHHOOOOOSSSSSHHHHHH . The wind was that strong that it sooked the vampire in.

 

 

 

CHAPTER 2

 

It was a bumpy ride for the vampire because it was taking him somewhere , he didn"t know where. It was dark inside the box and the vampire thought to himself just how i like it. The vampire was wondering how long it would take for the box to stop , and where it was taking him. The vampire was a bit scared but didn"t want to say anything incase it wouldn"t stop !! He was hungry as well .......... to be continued

 

THE MAGIC BOX - SELF- EVALUATION

 

I did enjoy reading the story.

I think the bits that are particulary strong are when i was saying true things about Vampires.

It is exciting and mysterious because you dont know what is going to happen next.

 

 

IT is easy to read and easy to understand.

                                                             Angela

Angela is a bad girl who like playing practical jokes and hers some things what Angela does.We both wanted to get our own back on Angela,but we dont how to !!!!!!I walked in to the hotel then Daniel soon followed.After we soon crept in .We stopped to see if Angela  was there.She was, in the lounge making  the T.V all fuzzy ,turning the volume button up and down until it soon popped off.We crept upstairs , in to her bedroom. Daniel put crumbs in her bed and i put fake spiders under her pillow.

                Angela  then thumped upstairs laughing . Me and Daniel hid behind  the door ,then  ran downstairs and out of the door. Luckily Angela didnt here us . Then we suddenly heard a big scream Angela shouting who done this ? We thought we had got of as Daniel and i were still standing outside. Angela looked out of her window and  we got caught in the game . Angela said to us i"ll get my own back . We just  ran.

             The nextagain day Angela was still up to her horrible tricks.Putting sand on the floor and overflowing thesink and bath. The question was , is she going to play any horrible tricks on meandDaniel . At lunchtime Daniel and i went  out exploring  down at the sand and sea with the shells. We heard  foot steps behind us  we looked aroundto see ifanyone was there . There was  no one so we just thought  it was our own foot steps . When we were looking at the shells . "BOOH" !!!!!!!!, shouted Angela . She pushed  us down and put shells down tops .............