The Happy Bunny Friends

There once were 4 happy bunny friends called Flopsy, Flippy, Nutty and Cuddles and their job was to be Easter bunnies. Every Easter they go round the houses delivering eggs and Cola to the children. But one easter every thing went wrong. The easter eggs and cola was not there, some bad kids took the eggs and cola away. The friends found a bottle of cola and it was empty... Flippy called the cola king and told him the cola was stolen. Nutty had suddenly dissapeared and there was no sign of him. Nutty was found giving the eggs and cola to the bad kids for money. When they caught him he had to buy the eggs and cola back from the kids. Then marshins landed and they ate the eggs and drank the cola and Easter was spoiled until next year.

When next year came the marshins came back with bigger eggs and lime cola and Easter was saved by marshins. They used a time machine and saved last easter and they lived happly ever after.

Angela

the trouble with Angela is that she very easliy gets bored . She's not content to read a book or paint a picher or knit herself a scarf.She has to be ploting and scheming and causing truble all the time. Me and Danile came backfrom our walk . we saw to people drenched . i looked u and saw Angla laghthing with a bucket in hher hand. me and Daniel couldint help but laghth.Somthing came to us that day , we whanted to Join angala  we rushed up stairs  and toled her that we whanted to join her.She toled us we where in. We morning we whent in to the vents some of the rooms where emptay. we came to a room that we know the peson was out for the day.We opend a draw in his room and fund a passport and a report writtin in Russin.We put his socks in the sink and his pillows in the shower.we herdthe door nobe turn.We ran to the vent and escaped but danile's shew came off.

I just rellised he cared an unbrela and it was int raining and the report i'm serrten he's a spy. The next morning on the news it said that a man had been shot in the head by a metel pelet . I whent to get angala but she was gone and so was Danile. i phoned the poliec and they whent to the spy's room. They kiced down the door and the spy jumped out the window rather than be arested.Angala and Danile where locked in the shower. we set them free Angala lent a leassen that time never play trikes on spys.

 magic box

ONE SUMMERS DAY IN GRANNYS HOUSE. THE BOX APEARED and voices where chanting gold dust !!!. {Granny is 5.5 feet tall , a bit fat ,hair grey , age 59 ,kind loving, retired and has no gold dust. She hears little feet coming up the stairs. Then she sees a little gold man at the end of the bed wearing a mask that was gold ,a spear at his side. His name is Jambo the great ,he's the leader. He is 5 inch tall and small and strong ,2 000 000 year old but looks 14. His wife is called gold eye , she is 4.89 inch tall ,has a gold dress on . They are guarded by guards wearing gold armor. They have spears at ther sides. Every gold adult is 4.9 inches tall ,every teenager 3 inch , children 2 to 2 and a half inch babes ,1 inch and the only one who is 5 inches tall is the leader. He demands gold dust. The old lady said I'll get you gold dust. THE GOLD PEOPLE EAT GOLD DUST . THEY ARE HUNGRY AND ARE HUNTING THE EARTH FOR SOME AND THEY FOUND THE OLD LADY.

chapter two

Grany looked in the box with a gasp of excitement. The gold people jumped on to her and pinned her to the ground. Jambo the great was disgraced. A huge plant came out of the box and swallowed her . Five hundred years passed every body who bought the house was eaten till jambo had a son. The house was up side down. The gold people made a city and in it there is a cathedral, skyscrapers, houses, shops, d,i,y shops too and a gold palace. Jambos son grew up and started a new tribe. For a year all new born babies where given to him. Jambo and the rest of the tribe went away and made a new home.

Jambos son never saw his dad again . He also did not want to because they would have to fight to the death. He made a box for him self. It took 200 years to build. The new owner of the house was eaten by the newer ,hungrier and bigger plant. Years past and an other tribe entered the house. The two leaders met and demanded a fight to the death. The next day everybody ate and drank . The leaders prepard for tomorrow . It's the next morning and they are ready.

chapter three

The two leaders fought bravely but Fredybob won thats Jambos son. Darth vader the good bought the house. The gold people didn't attak him. All they did was pray to him. Fredybob said, "the prophiecy has been FULFILLED."

"What on earth!" SCREEMED Darth. "What do you mean prophiecy?''.

"He does't know" balled fredybob "come on it's wriitten all over the walls".

darth bought a gold mine and supplied the gold people. He was very kind he also bought a dairy a burger king and a mic donlds. Four years later they have a mansion built and body guards. fredybob had a son he was called fredybob2.

Darth died later on and the people were very scared because his mean son would take over and bully the till the end .Thats what he did he tried to feed them to ants,cat's and dogs. They raged war on him. They killed the dogs in the garden , the cats too and the ants . They burst the tires of his car and his bike. People quit ther jobs. The butler was gone so ware the maid's and all so the car driver. They drove him crazyer than crazy. He went and stole cats and dogs and also kidnaped his nextdoor neighbour. The police surrounded the house and so did the gold people. He was arested and put in a straight jaket and put in the lonny bin. Every one was happy. THE END

self evaluation

I enjoyed reading it because it's well written and also a little bit hard to follow.

i think chapter two and the end are good beacause she opens the box in chapter two and it is a bit funny at the end of the story with the strate jacket and all.

some words to discribe my story mystrouis because you have to figer out what is happing.

well written becasue I writt it and spent time and efort on this.

hard to follow because i ofen make my stors hard to follow.

i think chapter three at end because the mad man is a bit funny with the arest and the kidnaping and the strate jaketyes i an pleased with my story. altho it's a bit hard to follow.

my story line is complacated and hard to fallow.