Sisters

 

 

 

 

Narrarator:   Hi Emma and Roxy are two sisters that

have to share a computer in their bedroom, but Emma thinks it's only her's becauseit is on her side of the room.

 

 

Nicola: stop using my computer!

 

 

Rebecca:Why? I am not doing anything!

 

 

Nicola: Em you keep deleting my homework!!!

 

 

Rebecca:We'lli don't mean to!

 

 

Nicola:we'll why don't you just not go on it

 

 

Rebecca:But I want to talk to to my friends on msn andplay games on it !!

 

 

Nicola:Fine then ask me first if you really want to use my msn to talk to your friends

 

 

Rebecca:Maybe we could make a rotafor the computer?

 

 

Nicola:Ok I could go on Mondays,Wednesdays,Fridays and Sundaysand you could go on Tuesday's,Thursday's and Saturday's

 

 

 Rebecca:Ok you can get one more day then me because homewotk is more important !!!

 

 

 Nicola:But sometimes I might let you get one more day then me!!

 

 

 Rebecca:YEY!!!

 

 

 

Narrarator:So Emma and Roxy agreed and every second day they both got a turn on the computer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Magic Box

 

 

 

People say I am tall for my age . I have spiky brown hair & my dad calls me a vampire because I have two sharp teeth like fangs . I think I'm nosy because I go to places where I'm not supposed to and I get into adventures.

 

"Sammy, time for breakfast get up now or you'll be late for school,"yelled Mum from upstairs.

"Mum, I'm just up don't shout," replied Sammy.

 

He got up and washed his brownish freckled face and rubbed his sky blue eyes then shuddered but then again it was supposed to be the coldest,snowiest day in December and tomorrow was Christmas. He finished brushing his white shining teeth and put on his school t-shirt ,black trousers, shined his shoes put them on and went to school. On the way to school he met his best friend Lukas and his sister Uyana.

 

"Oh, hey Lukas, hey Uyana,"shouted Sammy across the road to them.

"Hey, Sammy,"they replied,"you'll never guess what we saw last night?"

"What ,What tell me !!"begged Sammy.

"Fine,well we walked past the forbidden forest and we saw this old house covered in bats, cobwebs and spiders but the only thing was it wasn't there yesterday," they said together .

"Wierd!"exclaimed Sammy.

 

They finished walking to school that day they had P.E first so they dicided in P.E to take Sammy's dog for a walk into the forbidden forest after school. Every minuite felt like a lifetime. Finally the bell rang they ran home to get ready for the walk. Uyana had got grounded. She was being cheeky to her mum(she is always cheeky when she's exited)....... to be continued

 

 

 

 

Self evalulation- Magic box

 

Q.Did you enjoy reading the story?

A.I did not like my story I think I could have put more effort into it .

 

Q.Which parts do you think are paticulary strong?

A.The paragraph after the first conversation.

 

Q.Tick the words below that apply to your storyand say why?

A.Well written and easy to read. I think it's well written and easy to read because it is a story I would give to a 8 year old.

Q.Which part of the story do you think is best and why?

A.The last paragraph because it tells you a bit about what is happening in chapter 2.

 

Q.Are you pleased with the beginning? Why?

A.Yes, because I have never started a story like that before.

Q. Is the storyline easy to follow? Is it too complicated? Is it too simple?

A the storyline is too easy to follow I think I could make it better.

 

 

                                                                   Angela

 

And we saw Angela's clothes all over our hotel room. We shouted on Angela out our hotel room window because she was at the poolside, but she didn't here us. So we got the elevator to the hall and ran outside. There was Angela lying on a deep-blue sunbed with her hair tied tightly wearing her new pink swimming suit. We ran down to see her but when we got down there she was running,running running and SPLASHeveryone soaking wet, screaming by the children, crying by the babies and wait "ANGELA!!!" yelled an anonymous voice. Could that be him, it couldn't be, how? where?

 

                                                    "Dad," I shouted "is that you?"

He ran down from the rocks at the beach.

                                                                                          " Dad, dad," I screamed,

 

 

Rebecca:Ok you can get one more day

 

 

 

on because home work is more

 

 

 

important!!!

 

Nicola: But sometimes i might let you

 

 

Rhianne: Emma and Roxy are two sisters that share a

 

computer in there bedroom (Emma thinks its hers). Emma

 

has to do her homework but Roxy keeps crossing it off, to

 

play games. What will they do????

 

Nicola: Stop using my computer!

 

 

Rebecca: Why? I'm not doing anything.

 

Nicola: Em, you keep deleting my

 

homework!

 

Rebecca: Well I don't mean to.

 

Nicola: Well why don't you just not go

 

on it!

 

Rebecca: But I want to talk to my

 

friends on MSN and play games!!!

 

Nicola: Fine then but ask first if you

 

really want to talk to YOUR friends on

 

MY msn.

 

Rebecca: Maybe we could make a rota

 

for the computer??

 

Nicola:Ok I could go on Mondays,

 

Wednesdays, Fridays and Sundays.

 

And You Could go on Tuesdays,

 

Thursdays and Saturdays.

 

on a day more than me.

 

Rebecca:YEY!!!

 

Rhianne: So Nicola and Rebecca agreed and every two

 

days they got a turn.