The Magic Box

 

 

In the corner of Maria`s room lies a bright multi coloured box that her Grandfather brought down from his dusty old loft. Maria was curious to find out what was inside.

Maria called round all her friends to tell them all about the MAGIC BOX. They were all standing looking at this great big multi coloured box, in the middle of Maria`s room. Everybody SCREAMED! they all said what`s inside Maria?. I don`t know I haven`t opened it yet replied Maria. Everyone said do you want to open it and see what`s inside because it could be dressing up clothes in it?. I don`t want to open it, and my grandpa told me not to open it the now so I am going to keep it in a safe place for the now. replied Maria

It is a few weeks later and Maria calls round her best friend called Alice. The same night Alice stayed for dinner. Then at 6.00pm Maria and Alice went up to Maria`s room to see the box. Then Alice said lets go and hide the box outside in a very good secret place so that when people come into your room they won`t see it that`s why it is good to hide it outside. why don`t i ask my mum if you can sleepover Alice? said Maria. yes that would be brilliant replied Alice. So Maria went down stairs and asks her mum if Alice can sleepover. Maria`s mum says yes she can sleepover if her mum says it`s ok. Maria replies can she phone her mum to see if it`s ok. yes of course darling replied mum. So Alice phoned her mum and her mum said yes if it`s ok with Maria`s mum. Mum can Alice just use my clothes and pyjamas? asks Maria.yes Maria of course she can use your clothes and pyjamas. said mum. Thank you mum replied Maria. Me and Alice are going out mum said Maria. Where are you going Maria replied Mum. Maria said we`re going to the park we`ll see you tonight. Mum said Ok be back at 9.30pm. Ok we will bye mum replied Maria. So they went out and hid the box under all the mud in the graveyard.

The same night they came home at 10.15pm as soon as they walked in the door Maria`s mum said Where have you been. Maria replied I`m so sorry mum we never realised the time. Ok darling but next time try and be on time. said mum. I was really worried about you. said mum. sorry mum I`ll be on time next time `` replied Maria. Alice and Maria went up stairs to plan all about the box, and as they were sitting there they were wondering what was in this great big box. Then two hours later ............................................................

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

 

Maria called round all her friends for the opening of the MAGIC BOX expecting to find some dressing up clothes. She slowly opened the box and everybody SCREAMED! as out popped a Magical Wizard. Maria said w-w-what are you doing in my box? I am here to give you two wishes that you really want replied the Wizard. what would you like to wish for said the Wizard. I don`t know what i want to wish for said Maria. Ok you can tell me what you want to wish for when you have decided said The Wizard. Have you decided what you want to wish for yet said The Wizard. No I haven`t decided yet I will tell you when I have made my mind up said Maria. Ok but make sure you tell me soon said The Wizard. It was two weeks later and Maria opened the box and the Wizard popped out. I know what I would like to wish for now so can I please tell you now said Maria.What do you want to wish for then said the Wizard. Yes you can tell me what you want to wish for said the Wizard.Ok i know what i want to wish for now said Maria. What do you want to wish for then because you can tell me when you want said the Wizard. I would like to wish for my dad to come back beause he died in a car crash two days after i was born and my mum wants him to come back aswell said Maria. Ok i will try and make your wish come true and i am really sorry to hear about your dad dying two days after you were born said the Wizard. Ok thank you very much said Maria. So Maria,her dad and her mum all went and bought a nice big house they took the box with them and as soon as they got to their new house the box disappeared and no-one could ever use it again. They all lived happily ever after in their new house.

 

 

 

((... The Magic Box...)) Chapter 3

So the box disappeared and nobody ever saw it again. Maria,her dad and her mum all lived happily ever after and Maria got a little baby sister and they called her Molly. Maria was so happy that she had got a wee sister Maria always looked after her and held he rall the time because she was so happy. Maria`s mum was pleased and Maria`s dad was pleased and Maria was really pleased that she had a wee sister to look after and hold she was so happy.

 

 

 

((...The Magic Box - Self - Evaluation...))

 

I enjoyed reading my story because it was very interesting.

I think people would like the start of my story the best.

The words i think describe my story are exciting,mysterious,well written and easy to read.

I think the best part is when Maria calls round all her friends for the opening of the magic box.

I am pleased with the beginning because it is interesting.

I think it is very easy to read and i think it is nice and simple to read.

 

Please leave a comment if you like my story.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                         ANGELA

 

I finished a story about a little girl called Angela she is always up to tricks.

 

When we got back from our walk we went to Angela`s house. We knocked the front door twice we got no reply, so we wen round the back and knocked once. There was still no reply so we went back round the front again and chapped Daniel and I got a reply this time. We said ``hello Angela are you coming out``.``No``she replied.``You can come in if you want`` replied Angela. So the three of us headed upstairs we all took a seat on Angela`s bed. Angela said ``So what do you want to do today``. Daniel and I both said ``I dont know you can decide Angela``.``Ok lets go and cause trouble``replied Angela. Daniel and i said ``why do you want to get up to mischief can`t we just go to the park or something and be good``.``Well i am never good and i want to scare someone`` said Angela. So then the three of us went to the hotel. Angela and i went into the girls bathroom and Daniel went into the boys bathroom. We covered the whole place in toilet paper. Then when Angela and i were in the toilet this little girl came in. We said ``what is your name ``.``My name is Lisa`` she replied. Lisa said ``what is going on in the toilet``.Angela and i said ``we did this but you can`t tell anyone ok``.``can i come with you both and do bad stuff aswell``.replied Lisa.``ok but we are jumping out of this window so just be careful and watch how you climb out incase you fall out``.said Angela and i.``thank you for letting me come i am so thanful``.said Lisa. We met Daniel at the back of the window we climbed out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                The Easter Hunt!

Next week is easter Sunday and my mum and Chloe`s mum are putting an easter hunt on for all our friends at Chloe`s house.We have to find all the pink eggs and we get a prize me and Chloe were searching the house for the prizes because we wanted to know what some of them were.One of the prizes was two real bunnies Chloe`s mum must have been hiding it and feeding it everyday because we were told not to go into that room.Another prize was a chocolate easter egg and an easter egg shaped as a bunny.We just couldn`t wait so we went round the doors and gave everyone there invitations.We gave most of the invitations to our family like our cousins,grans,aunties and uncles.We invited some of our friends like Connie , Ryan , Marc , Lisa , Jeanan and lots more.We were so excited that Chloe`s mum had to take us to do loan a pony for a day at welsfield farm to calm us down.After that we even got to go to Pizza Hut for lunch i had a cheese and tomato Pizza the same as Chloe.I was staying at Chloe`s house all week.It was going to be great.We will  talk about easter and eating all our easter eggs.Five minutes after we got in the house someone knocked on the door.It was Kayleigh she just came to tell us she couldn`t make the easter hunt because she had to pack for going to Australia.The week passed by quickly and it was soon Easter Sunday.The Easter hunt started at 1 o'clock but everyone was early they turned up at 12 o'clock instead.There was lots of food like mini pizza`s , sausagerolls , sausages , lots of juice , jelly and ice-cream there was also cakes.Chloe`s mum shouted us all through to the living room where the hunt was going to start.So she told us we were each to find 6 pink eggs then go back to the living room.She told us that the eggs were in the house in the front and backgarden.After we had all found our 6 eggs we gathered round in a circle on the floor and Chloe`s mum handed us our prizes.Chloe got one of the bunnies and i got the other one.Chloe decided to call her rabbit Toodles he was black and white and very cute.I decided to call my rabbit Snowie he is just plain white and very cute.Toodles is not as cute as Snowie.Shhhhhhhhhh don`t tell her i said that!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  Rachael and Connie play

 

Narrator)Caitlin and Chelsea sit next to each other in maths and Chelsea ofter gets stuck with her maths work.Chelsea asks Caitlin for her help.Caitlin always helps Chelsea.Then one day Caitlin and Chelsea fell out and Caitlin never helped Chelsea that day.They are now ready to negotiate.

 

 

Chelsea)Caitlin can you please help me with my maths work.

 

Caitlin)Yes Chelsea i will help with your work get out your pencil.

 

Chelsea)Caitlin i don`t have one today can i please borrow one of yours.

 

Caitlin)Yes of course will this one be ok.

 

Chelsea)Yes that one will be brilliant.

 

Caitlin)How are you getting on with your work now.

 

Chelsea)I`m kind of stuck and you will not help me.

 

Caitlin)I have been helping you for ages i am trying to get on with my own work.

 

Chelsea)Well can you not just help me for one more question.

 

Caitlin)No i am trying to do my own work.

 

Chelsea)Fine then don`t help me.

 

Caitlin)Fine then give me my pencil back.

 

Chelsea)Fine then here you go.

 

Caitlin)Go and get my pencil now.

 

Chelsea)No because it`s not mine.

 

Caitlin)So you threw it and that is my property.

 

Chelsea)Do i care no i don`t ok so going get it yourself now.

 

Caitlin)I am going to tell the teacher because you threw my property.

 

Chelsea)Well i`m angry with you.

 

Caitlin)I don`t care you shouldn`t have threw it.

 

Chelsea)Well you wouldn`t help me with my work.

 

Caitlin)I don`t care i was trying to get on with my own work.

 

Chelsea)Well you always said you would help me.

 

Caitlin)Well you need to try things for yourself.

 

Chelsea)I do but the answer is always wrong.

 

Caitlin)Well the teacher could help you.

 

Chelsea)She never helps me all she says is just try it again.

 

Caitlin)Well that is not very nice.

 

Chelsea)It`s not my fault.

 

Caitlin)Ok fine i will help you.

 

Chelsea)No because you never helped me when i asked you the first time.

 

Caitlin)Do you want to be friends again.

 

Chelsea)Ok then lets be best friends forever.

 

Caitlin)Ok lets never fall out again.

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                THE END!!!!!!!!!!!