Sisters
Narrarator: Hi Emma and Roxy are two sisters that
have to share a computer in their bedroom, but Emma thinks it's only her's becauseit is on her side of the room.
Nicola: stop using my computer!
Rebecca:Why? I am not doing anything!
Nicola: Em you keep deleting my homework!!!
Rebecca:We'lli don't mean to!
Nicola:we'll why don't you just not go on it
Rebecca:But I want to talk to to my friends on msn andplay games on it !!
Nicola:Fine then ask me first if you really want to use my msn to talk to your friends
Rebecca:Maybe we could make a rotafor the computer?
Nicola:Ok I could go on Mondays,Wednesdays,Fridays and Sundaysand you could go on Tuesday's,Thursday's and Saturday's
Rebecca:Ok you can get one more day then me because homewotk is more important !!!
Nicola:But sometimes I might let you get one more day then me!!
Rebecca:YEY!!!
Narrarator:So Emma and Roxy agreed and every second day they both got a turn on the computer.
The Easter Bunny
It was a warm Springs day.A little boy called Jamie. was playing outside when he heard a russel the bush.He walked over very slowly then he started to hear hopps he started to get scared incase it was a giant .Then he saw It wasn't a giant It was a big bunny."Who are you" asked Jamie very scared."I am the Easter Bunny and I will give you lots of Easter Eggs if you play with me!"said the Easter bunny.Jamie could not belive It ,his dream finially came true "I've always wanted to meet the easter bunny" said Jamie "well now you have"replied the easter bunny. "do you want to play with me " asked Jamie."well I could play with you for a little while and then I have to get ready for easter and get all the easter eggs ready for you and your friends" "ok " said Jamie,jamie and the easter bunny started to play tig. "your het" said jamie "no your het" said the Easter Bunny
Jamie ran and hid and he heard "Where are you "said the Easter bunny jamie kept quiet so he wouldn't hear him and tig him."Jamie,Jamie where are you it's time for me to go i'am here said jamie, here take this easter egg and share it with you and your friends ok said jamie I'll miss you I'll miss you to said the easter bunny,and the easter bunny hopped off.Jamie had a big gold and silver easter egg It was filled with yummy chocolate Jamie didn't share it with his friends he eat it all by his self and when he was done he had sore stummic because of all the chocolate that he was to share. so that's what he got for eating all the chocolate.so don't you be greedy and eat all your chocolate that you were to share.
Angela!!!!!!!!!!
I we were given a bit of a story called Angela and we were to finish it of so here's how i finished it.We went in to the Seaside Hotel ,and Angela was waiting at the main door for us to come back.She was flinging grass from outside ,at all the people who walked through the Main door, And then she seen us "Horay!" Angela shouted " your finially back."Look what we fount" Daniel said. "Rocks" "yes rocks2 i said "why did you bring me rocks" replied Angela "Becaus they are really nice rocks "i said " here have then Daniel said.Angela took the rocks of Daniel and went, and put rocks and grass together and was flinging them at windows.Then she ran up the stairs andd in to the bathroom and got soap and shampoo and started squzing the bottles on the stairs so that people could slip and fall.
We tried to stop her but she wouldn't listen to us.The next thing we knew , she was making beans come out of the shower.Then the cook went into the shower and all you could here was "ANGELA!" shouted the cook "what,what" said Angela."Have you been playing with the beans that i cook with"said the cook "yes" replied Angela."Well you don't touch my things and you you don't fling anything or touch anything that doesen't belong to you,do you here me" yes" shouted Angela."And if you do behave you will get pocket money but if you don't behave you wont get any pocket money " "ok so if i behave i will get pocket money and if i don't behave i won't get pocket money" said angela "yes that's right" said the cook " ok i will give it a try" said angela.
Angela became a nice little girl after the cook talking to her, but sometimes she would be bad. So she thought about it and decided to be good, but not all the time.......
Magic Box!!!!!!!!!
One Saturday morning , a little boy called Ryan who was six years old was told he was moving house, so he had to clean out his room. Ryan was cleaning and cleaning until his room was spotless but there was still one thing to go in a box and in to the van. "IT'S A BOX COOL!!!!! , I want to open it" ,but his mum said," hurry up Ryan we have to go ."
" Look what I have found- a box," said Ryan .
" Well go and put it in the sandpit then because you are not taking it ,so hurry we really have to go," said mum.
"Ok! I am coming," replied Ryan.
"Look! the new people are here!" shouted mum.
There are five people in their family . There are the mum dad the twins Chloe and Nicola who are seven years old. There is also Lisa their big sister. She is 18 years old. They also have a big brother called Mark. He is 19 years old and he has a sports car and he takes his sister Lisa everywhere in it. Their mum was called Stacey and the dad is called Darren. Darren went over to the old people and gave them the money for the house. They got £75,000 for the house. The house had 4 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, 1 kitchen one living room, 1 playroom and 1 garage.
Chapter2!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Two days later, Chloe,Nicola,Lisa and Mark all ran into the house and pushed each other to get the best room. Chloe and Nicola got the second biggest room ,Lisa got the third biggest and Mark got the smallest and the mum and dad said that they are getting the biggest room there is.the smallest room has a toilet , a sink and a shower in it thats why Mark picked it. Chloe and Nicola's room is going to be
painted light pink on the bottom and dark pink on the top with pink carpet . Lisa is getting her rooml ight pink on the bottom and white on the top with wooden floor ,and Mark is getting his room light blue and a dark blue carpet, their mum and dad's room is burgindiey with a cream carpet . Chloe ,Nicola , Lisa and Mark went outside and chloe shouted LOOK!!!!!!! the sandpit
Lets go and play in it said Nicola
ok, said chloe
I will get all the buckets and spades from the shed, said Nicola
ok i will start digging, shouted chloe
i am back said Nicola.
Right now we can both start digging, said chloe. They were digging and digging and digging until they couldnt go any further....... to be continued
My self evaluation for the Magic Box!!!!!
We had to read over our story about the magic box and then think what we thought of it.
1~ Did you enjoy reading the story?~ No not really because i could of put more effort in to it
2~ Which parts do you think are particulary strong ~Where it tells you about the family
3~ is it exxciting? no because it is
Boring because i didn't really enjoy reading the story
4~ Which part of the story do you think is best and why ? ~ here it tells you about the family because it has adjectives
5~ Are you pleased with the beginning and why ~ No because it doesent make sence
6~ Is the stor lines easy to follow is it to complicated ~ Yes, it is not too conplicated
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