Easter Suprise!          

On Easter Morning the mother and father of Marc and Kayleigh hid easter eggs in the wood for there children to find. Kayleigh and Marc found all the easter eggs, and was walking back to find their parents when! they found a big shiny gold easter egg underneath an old oak tree. They agreed for Marc to carry it becasue he was the oldest. Marc dropped the egg and it smashed to pieces then a white fluffy white easter bunny jumped out. The easter bunny  hopped away as fast as it could kayleigh said " Marc, Marc let's follow it". So they did follow it and they came to a bush Kayleigh  was so excited that she ran into the bush and started screaming, so Marc ran into the bush aswell and found himself falling down a dark, dark hole.

                            Then at the bottom the children ended in a pile of mud. Kayleigh licked some off her finger and ate she said " mmm it taste's like chocolate" Marc says " your disgusting ". But anyway he tryed some to prove his sister wrong, but to his amasement it tasted just like chocolate. The off in the distance they both seen the easter bunny. The easter bunny was moving it's hand as it was saying follow me so the 2 children picked thereself up and followed it. The came to door made of chocolate they pushed it open and walked in they looked all around them they seen a houses fit for a rabbits and little stalls selling chocolate treats, they also saw no humans only rabbits. Then right at the end of the street there was massive building made of all kinds of chocolate. They went inside and seen their easter bunny friend. The easter bunny took both children by the hand and lead them to a special chocolate egg making machine. Marc made a triple chocolate egg and Kayleigh made a white chocolate egg with stawberry flavouring through it. Marc looks at his watch and says " oh my goodness we have to go". Then the easter bunny says can I show you chocolate land before you go. Kayleigh said yes before Marc had the time to say anything. Marc says " go on then but we must be quick".

                  Then they came to the town square there was a chocolate fountain for all the rabbits to collect their chocolate for the easter eggs. After that they went to the stalls and they got given little chocolate treats for them to eat. Then it was time to go they went through the chocolate doors and then white rabbit took them along to the hole and said " close your eyes and count to ten and you will be sucked up and land underneath the old oak tree" the white rabbit says " are you ready, ok 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9 and 10". In a flash of lighting they were underneath the old oak tree. The children went to find their mum and dad. Then they found them. On the car journey home they told their mum and dad all about the adventure they didn't believe it. When they got home there was loads of easter treats all over the livingroom floor. They went up to there bedroom and seen a little white rabbit hopping into the woods. There was a letter on Marc's bed it said - To Kayleigh and Marc I had fun with you today, remember i'm just down the hole, behind the bush across from the old oak tree, see you soon your sincerly The Easter Bunny.

                                                           The End!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I read a story and I had to continue the story about Angela who liked to play nasty tricks.

 

 

 

 

We walked into the hotel to find guests screaming all over the hotel,paintings in all the wrong rooms. Then we saw Angela walking down stairs with bubblebath in her hand, she was squeezing it everywhere. After that I went to go and get a bath to find not water come out of the taps but bleach, I said to myself "Angela", I stepped out of the bath. I dryed myself and went down to the reception, I was screaming at angela " WHY DID YOU PUT BLEACH IN THE TAPS!". Daniel was trying to find a channel on the t.v but the ariel was gone.

                      The next morning at breakfast me and Daniel were going to have some cornflakes with sugar but it wasn't sugar it was salt, we tryed it and it and I was wondering and I said " that's not sugar that is salt," I said to Angela, " did you put salt in the sugar container?" Angela replied " no who would do such  a thing" but it was Angela she was trying to deny it. Me,Daniel and Angela went on a walk along the beach, Angela was well behaved on the walk but when we walked back into the hotel sh started to get up to no good. I went to the reception to ask for a hire for the t.v. I was going to watch it but it didn't work again. Daniel went up the stairs to go and have a little nap, he pulled the covers off and to find big black scary spiders on the matress. Daniel screamed. 3 hours later it was bed time Daniel checked his bed but their was nothing their.

                                                             2 days later it was time to leave, Angela was still getting up to no good, she turned to lights off and she done lots more. An hour later we packed our suitcases and we put them in the car. Then we drove away. Angela put stones in the exhaust pipe. All the stones went flying out of the exhaust pipe and hit lots of people on the beach. She also put flour in the compartment which made everyone sneeze and cough.

           When we got home Angela cut the electricity cord, we couldn't watch t.v, play on the computer or play on my x-box. We had to go out for dinner we went to M'cdonalds. An hour later we went back home. I went to my bed and I found big scary spiders in it I shouted " ANGELA!"

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((... The Magic Box ...))

 

In front of a deep dark creepy forest.There was a house which was 100 years old. It was crooked and scary inside the house,there was a secret inside the attic that nobody knew about even on this day. A few years later there was an old man that moved into the house but he did not even know about the secret in the attic. He moved into the house because he wanted away from the public in the town. 3 years later there was a girl born in the old mans house and her name was Maria,the old man became her grandpa because it was his son's wife that had the baby. Later on in the year the grandpa's son and his wife died in a car crash. So the grandpa had to raise his grandaughter, Maria.

When Maria was 10 she became really suspicious because she kept hearing noises in the attic. So one day she went up into the attic becasue she was bored so she was up in the attic and she seen a small thing right at the back of attic,she moved forward to the thing she said"that's a box". The box shuddered and she got a fright of her life . She screamed"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she ran back down stairs and told no one about the box. After her dinner she went back up to the attic and picked up the box and put it in her room and opened it and light shone out of it and it almost blinded her but it didn't.

She closed the box and showed it to her grandpa her grandpa said "what is that,". Maria said "It is a box,open it" -. Her grandpa

opened it and got a shock becasue it shuddered itself. Maria took this letter out of the box it was all ripped and it was brown because it was old and dusty. The letter said "to the owner of this box, write with a pencil at the bottom of this box and write what you wish and it will come true". They did not know what to wish for.

 

 

 

 

((....CHAPTER 2 THE MAGIC BOX...))

 

Maria and her grandpa took some time to think of a wish to write at the bottom of the box.Then Maria said " I have a wish to wish for and that is that my parents come back to life again".So Maria got a pencil and wrote at the bottom of the box. She wrote what she wished for. A few seconds later a light shone in the distance and they saw Maria's parents come back to life. Maria went up to her parents and gave them a big big hug. Maria's dad said " we have not got a lot of time to live so we might aswell make the most of it." Maria said "there are lots of things I want to do with you and they are mountain biking,swimming,ski-ing and many more." A few days later they had done everything Maria wanted to do with them. A few days later Maria's mum and dad had to go away. Maria started to cry and gave her mum and dad a big hug. So Maria's mum and went away and she was still crying. So Maria went to see her grandpa becasue Maria was in the Cinemas. Her grandpa gave her a big hug and Maria weeped "they are gone, they have". So Maria's grandpa said " there there everything is going to be alwrite."

 

 

 

 

((...CHAPTER 3...))

 

A few months later the magic box dissapeared into the ocean and knowbody ever used it again. Then the magic box exploded and all it's magic came bursting out and made a tsumani. Then some divers heard about a magic box making a tsumani and exploding so they went into the ocean and tryed to find remains of the box but they only found 1 only 1.Back in the town Maria switched on the T.V and heard the news reporter say " some divers have found remains of a magic box in the ocean." Maria shouted to her grandpa " grandpa! grandpa! some divers have found the magic box!!!!".Maria's grandpa came through and sat on the sofa and looked at the T.V with beady eyes. Maria's grandpa said " how did that get there, I wonder." Maria said " It's MAGIC!

 

 

 

 

((...THE MAGIC BOX - SELF EVALUATION...))

 

I enloyed reading my story because it was mysterious.

The parts I think are particulary strong are the end of chapter 2 becasue her parents die

 

The words I think describe my story are exciting,well written,mysterious and easy to read

 

Now I am going to tell you why

 

Exciting - Good Adjectives

Well Written - Easy to read.

Mysterious - Parents came back to life in a shimmering light.

 

The part of the story I liked best was all of it .

 

I am pleased with my beginning becasue it was my start of my story.

My storyline is easy to follow becasue the grandpas son and wife died.

 

Please leave a comment if you enjoyed my story.

 

 

                     The Fight              

 

Narrator: Marc and Chloe are fighting over the computer, there not sure who's turn it is.There mum's gone shopping and there dad's at work.They're left in the house alone!!

 

Chloe: It's my turn on the computer!

 

Marc: No it's my turn, you had a shot yesterday!

 

Chloe: yeah but I was doing my homework now I want to listen to music and play games!

 

Narrator: Marc and Chloe started fighting over the mouse!

 

Marc: Well that's tough! (Marc takes the mouse)

 

Chloe: Give me the mouse (Chloe takes the mouse)

 

Marc: No i'll have the mouse thank you (He snatched the mouse)

 

Chloe: Now look what you've done you broke the mouse, I'm telling mum when she gets back!

 

Marc: Mum's back, lets see who's turn it is!

 

Chloe: Your in trouble because you broke the mouse, you won't get a shot!

 

Marc: Wait a minute if the mouse is broken no one can go on the computer

 

Chloe: Thanks to you

 

Marc: No, thanks to you

 

Chloe: No, Thanks to you

 

Narrator: It turned out no one was allowed on the computer, but they couldn't go on anyway!!

 

Narrator: They had to neogiate and shook hands and stopped fighting.

 

Chloe: Let's Stop Fighting.

 

Marc: Yeah!

 

 

Thank You For Reading Our Play!

Chloe And Marc!