Piano !!!
Narrator: Jenna plays piano but her mum wants her to practice more. Jenna dosn't want to play the piano and wants a flute instead.
Jenna: Mum I know your busy but...
Mum:What?
Jenna: can I get a flute?.
Mum : No way you need to practice on your piano. And your getting even better
Jenna : but mum everyone else at school has one.And I will be better at the flute than what I am at the piano. And there is after school clubs for the flute
Mum : Well you get lessons for the piano and for the last time,your not getting one and thats final. Now go and practice.
Narrator : Jenna storms off and goes to her friends house and Mum is very angry. When Jenna comes back her mum talks with her.
Mum: Where have you been ?
Jenna: At my friends why?
Mum: because you were meant to be practicing the piano.
Jenna: So
Mum:Anyway, I have had a think about this flute sittuation and I have decided that I will get you a flute as long as you practice your piano three times a week and get lessons for your piano.And you can only play the flute after the piano
Jenna : Oh thanks Mum I promise I will PRACTICE all the time on my flute and piano.
Narrator: So mum negotiated and decided if she practiced more she could get her flute.
King Bouncer!
Hayley was a little girl who lived with her mum and dad in the country. Her mum and dad bought her a rabbit just before easter as a birthday present because her birthday was a few weeks before it.Hayley didn't know what to call her new rabbit so she had a long think.Her dad suggested Bob, she thought it was silly.Her mum then suggested Bouncer. Hayley thought it was perfect.She wrote 'Bouncer' at the top of his cage so everyone would see it.Soon it became the night before easter and Hayley was getting more and more excited.Hayley was thinking about easter and she was always interested in learning new things. So she asked her mum,"Mummy who is the easter bunny?".
Her mum said, "I don't know dear. But he is very special and will only give you an easter egg if you are a good girl and go straight to sleep!"
So off Hayley ran up to her bedroom and she jumped straight into her bed and went to sleep.Later on she woke up and realized she hadn't said good night to Bouncer.So she creeped past her mums and dads room and ran out to the garden. Bouncer was looking out his cage at Hayley. "Oh Bouncer I forgot to say good night,I'm sorry. Do you know who the easter bunny is, I really want to know!" He didn't answer back so she walked towards her back door. She turned back round to Bouncer ."Are you the easter bunny?". He winked with his tiny little eye.Hayley was so excited she ran back into her house to tell her mum but she thought it would be better to take bouncer too.She walked back out to get him but to her surprise there was a big white rabbit standing smiling at her. "Are you the easter bunny?" she asked him.
"Yeah and your bunny too!" He said.
"Is it you bouncer?" Hayley said.
"Yes I certainly am. I am away to easter land to check up on those little bunnies of mine. They work for me and make the eggs for you!"Bouncer said.
"Oh bouncer. Can I come and I will be a good girl because mummy said naughty girls don't get easter eggs!"Hayley asked her rabbit.
"Yeah but remember be a good girl." Bouncer took her hand and off they walked to easter land.
When they got there Hayley could see loads of rabbits just like Bouncer. All white and fluffy with pink pads on there paws.When she walked over the grass with Bouncer, she seen little yellow chicks running by. They were making noises and saying "Easter is coming , oh hello King Bouncer!"
"Hello there little ones!"He said back
"King, wheres the king?" Hayley asked Bouncer.
"I am the king of easter land !" Bouncer said.Hayley walked on feeling really suprised.They finally reached the factory.It was gold and shiny."Go on open the doors and see whats inside!"He said. She opened the door and seen loads of big chocolate eggs getting wrapped in paper that were pink, orange , green , blue , lilac and every other colour you can think of. Bouncer walked over to a little one of his helpers and whispered something in his ear. The little helper ran off to get something. Shortly after, he came back with a big pink shiny parcel with a white sparkly bow. Bouncer said "Its your easter egg but only open it on easter day, time you got back home now, on the count of three you will be home..1....2....3!"
Hayley woke up lying on her bed all wrapped up. She wondered if it was a dream. She looked around there was the easter egg!She ran out to see Bouncer because she wasn't fully sure. It could have been the egg her mum gave her. She said to Bouncer "Was it real?". Bouncer winked to her. She ran up to her room and opened her easter egg. Inside written on the choclate with icing was her name and a little message saying 'May your easter wishes come true' and in even smaller writing under that it said 'again'.
THE END
Angela !
We walked up the path to the hotel where Angla was to stay. We walked in expecting something to jump out on us but nothing........ Everywhere we went nothing happened, then we shouted for Angela she didn't answer. I tried to phone Angela but again nothing.
"Where could she be? I'm getting worried." said Daniel, "what if....."
"Nothing, nothing will have happened to her it will be another one of her jokes!" I snapped! "She will be hiding from us. Just keep looking she is obviously here."
I tried t keep a positive face as I said that to Daniel, to be honest I was getting worried! Angela is one of my best friends, who knows what has happened.
We walked outside and began to shout her name but still no answer. At that moment we turned around and saw a little girl that looked about five years old. She had short blonde hair and blue eyes. Almost like crystals.
"What is your name?" Daniel and I said together.
"Amy," she said quietly acting shy.
"Ok" Daniel said. "do you want to help us find our friend Angela."
"Ehh ok then, I am quite sure that she stopped and introduced herself to me," squeaked Amy.
"So what are we waiting for?" shouted Daniel!"
We walked along the street quietly. Then we went into the deep dark forest ans started to look for Angela. We only had to take to steps in the forest and we found Angela. I t seemed as though Angela and Amy knew each other pretty well. We walked back to the hotel and went to bed. The next morning we woke up to find our entire room painted with brown slimey paint. I got right out of my bed and marched straight to Angelas room, where there was no brown paint. Angela told me that she didn't do it and that it might have been Amy or Daniel, so Angela got dressed and we went to Daniels room and their was slime in his room, then we went to Amys room wherethere was lots of slime covering the whole room and on the roof. We all turned around and looked at Angela, then Angela ran of and hid screaming and crying because it wasn't her. MJore things happened in the hotel that week like the whole hotel got covered in toilet paper. The light bulbs got changed from a normal light bulb into tomato sauce, so that when you turned the light on tomato sauce would pour out. Every single thing that happened Angela swore that it wan't her. I did have have a little suspicion that it could have been Amy.
Then a few weeks later Angela did all of her homework, did everything that she was told to and she ate her dinner with a knife and fork instead of with her hands but still the tricks went on and on. So we all had a plan to see who it was once and for all.....
The Magic box! Chapter 1
The story begins on Friday the 13th. There is a young girl called Alice and a man Jim. Alice was having a baby but as they are travelling to the hospital there there is a car accident. Jim unfortunitly dies without any hope of survival but Alice is alive but just..... she gets rushed to hospital and has her baby but unfortunitly she dosn't make it and dies too. Her baby was a healthy baby but had no parents, she was going to be sent into care but her caring grandpa wouldn't allow it so he took her the tiny baby and said I will call you Maria after your mums, mum thats how she would have wanted it. He walked into the house and thought to his self I need a better more secure home for Maria so he looked through newspapers and more newspapers and he finally found the perfect house. All he had to do was pay for the house he got a loan for £100,000 and baught the house it had two bathrooms , a dining room, a kitchen, a living room, three bedrooms and an attic which had never had so much as two people in it because there is a story about a man who went in the attic but never came back out and no one has been in since even the fire fighters and the police wouldn't set foot in the attic of the house.People say the man must have fell and died because no one would go and save him. But others say he is a ghost now and haunts anyone who dares to go in. It's five years later and Maria is starting school. When she goes her grandpa is acting weird and doesn't say bye!
"Grandpa, are you not even giong to say bye?" asked Maria.
"Of course not, I mean yes bye dear now, run along, you don't want to be late!" stuttered Grandpa.
When she came home, Grandpa was up stairs and as Maria came up she said "What are you doing?"
"N..n...n..Nothing!" replied Grandpa.
But Grandpa has saw the box and knew it was powerful. He knew he had to protect his granddaughter from harm.
Grandpa managed to stop Maria from knowing for a few years by forgetting all about the box but on Maria's 11th birthday, things got out of control.
Strange glowing began coming from the attic, strange noises began to occur and Maria got very suspicious and climbed up to the attic when Grandpa was sleeping.
Maria pushed and pushed the door but it wouldn't open.So she pulled but that didn't work. She looked around and saw a latch leading up to the attic, she tried to open it but she couldn't reach and she couldn't ask grandpa he would go crazy. So she crept down the stairs and into the kitchen she got as many boxes as she possibley could and took them back to the attic. Then she climbed on top of them and reached up and was able to reach the latch and she pulled herself up and into the attic but all there was, was boxes, boxes and more boxes she couldn't believe it. She knew that there was something in the attic other than old,boring brown boxes, she knew it, she just knew it. Maria climbed out of the attic and ran down the stairs of the attic along the hall way and jumped into her bed and went to sleep. The next day her grandpa went to work and Maria was supposed to go to school but she didn't she took the key from under the door mat and crept into the house she climbed up the stairs of the attic and suddenly...............
The Magic Box~Self~Evaluation
Yes I enjoyed writing the story but I made a few mistakes!
From my story I think the particulary good part of my story is the part where Maria starts getting suspicous.
The words I think that describe my story best are exciting, thrilling,mysterious and well writen.
The best part of my story was the last part because it gets more exciting nearer the end.
I am pleased with my beginning because I think it is pretty freaky because it starts on Friday the 13th.
I think my story is easy to follow because there is not many different things going on at the same time.
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