Narrator: Two boys James and Adam are argueing about who can go on the computer to go on their faveourite game runescape.
James: I have loads of important things on runescape.
Adam: No your a noob I could OWN you with my rune long.
James:I want to get my levels up!
Adam: I need a granite maul though.
James:I only have 30 strength.
Adam:Ha i have 48 strength.
James:We could have half an hour each.
Adam:Ok deal.
the bad bunny Jhon is always causing trouble in the small town of elderburry as he is always stealing the easter eggs before they can be given to the kids. there is a large problem every year and the other kids are sick and tired of the bad bunny stealing them.
"can you please stop it your making the kids upset," the kids said.
"so ive stole them this year and you have no idea where they are hahaha,"said Jhon.
"we'll find them then," the kids said and wondered off to the cliff.
they got to the top of the cliff and gareth fell on the floor and they all heard something moving, then they looked over thier shoulers and seen a large door opening for the side of the cliff. then they seen a large bag and inside it and seen all the eggs that have been stolen. this turned into the best easter ever so the kides gave back th eggs and the bunny king was very excited so he granted the childer with ever lasting egges but as the thought is was all go well Jhon's twin that was even eviler than Jhon him self. The twin had the same crule plans as Jhon ,so as soon as the children Jamies Jamie and Thomas herd about this. They were on the case James asked "Jamie, what do we do at the start of an egg stealing case"
Jamie said, "well, wcae like foot prints or other clues that to show he was here."
ok then there were some kids that caght the last stealer maybe we shold go get them befor getting clues then go and there he I can see him kwite far away
09/02/07
New Topic
Our all new topic in school is WW2. Our homework this week was to find two facks about evacuation.
THE MAGIC BOX
Chapter 1
This story is about three good friends named James, Jamie and Thomas. They all go on an adventure. James has dark brown hair and he plays rugby. Jamie is tall and has black hair he is agile and stealthy as a cat prawling about in the night. Jamie enjoys basketball and skateboarding he is also a 2nd dan black belt in tae kwon do. Dark black hair tall and strong but slow. He enjoys skateboardnig and rugby and plays for the same team as James.
They were bored in the house with nothing to do so james suggested to play truth or dare.
"truth or dare," said james to thomas
"truth,"said thomas unenthusiastiactically.
"Do you fancy anybody?" asked james interested in a questionative way
"Uhhh,, ehhh, no way would I ever fancy any girl 'coz all of them are ugly!!" snapped Thomas.
Thomas dared 'James and Jamie to go in the forbidden attic'
So they did . They walked up the stairs slowly and scared. They reach the forbidon attic. The door was old rickity and entirely ancient. The 2 boys were shaking infront of the door, a shiver ran down thier spine. There faces turned as white as snow.
Chapter 2
There, in front of them stood a door, so covered in cobwebs it looked like no one had be up here ever. Thomas pushed the door open and James and Jamie they stepped in the attic, they snapped the webs with a pencil.
Suddenly, a glow of light burst out a box Jamie and James went over to investagate the box. James grabbed the box and ran out the attic and Jamie slowly followed. James's mum came up the staires. They hid it in James's room under his bed. "Thomas and Jamie have to go home" said james's mum. "Can Thomas and jamie stay over at the week end". said james.
"OK",said james's mum.
CHAPTER 3
Slowly came the week end, and Thomas and Jamie came over. They all rushed up the stares and stood around the box. James opened the box. They appered in the mountain top in Scotland's Highlands. This was not good for James because he was scared off heights. They look for shelter and they came lucky, they gladly found a cave and slept for the night.
CHAPTER 4
The next day came with good luck. They found the box in a dreding cave near the back. They opened the box and boom malticulared sparkes went passed their eyes. They could get a sight of their room agian. They appeared back where they started .
By James
Self Evaluation
I did not like reading my story. It was like all my other stores.
The part that I liked best was my second paraghraph, because it has a lot of discription.
The three words that are discribing my story.
are exciting, fast moving and scary.
It is exciting because it is a big adventure and it has a lot of discription.
It was also fast moving because it has hardly any discription.
Scary is the last word that discribes my story.
I dont like the start because my story because dose not colide together.
The story has alot of long words.
Please leav a mesage...
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