THE MAGIC BOX

 

One dark cold winter afternoon in November 1977 at 3.15pm an old man named Tommy Frank was sitting in his bungalo at the end of Rose street in Californa in scotland. He was watching the children playing outside then suddenly he heard a knock at his door. Mr Frank went and openend the door and it was a delivery all wrapped up in crhistmas paper. He taken it inside and opened it up and the box had a silvery goldish coulor ,and also had a big sign on it which said DO NOT OPEN. So tommy left it shut just like people would usally do and then put it in his bedroom. That night Mr Frank turned his television off and went to his bed. The next day the box started to make a noise. He thought it was coming from outside so he left it. At 7.30am Mr Frank got up and heard the wierd but funny noise. He looked outside and nobody was out and later on in the day Mr Frank was sitting in his chair then and then he just tane a fit but luckily he had buzzer so he pulled it. When Mr Frank got tane away in the ambulance a young boy walked past. He walked past. So the young boy opened the door. The young boy was also homeless so he needed somewhere to stay until the winter had ended and the summer came in. Two month later Tommy Frank came home to his nice cosey little flat The young boy was livng up the loft and he was the first person to see the upstairs. Tommy was sleeping that night and he started to hear strange noises coming from the attic. So he went up to the loft to see what it was and he seen the little boy sleeping in the loft . He left him up there until the morning . It was morning and the young boy was still sleeping so Tommy made him some breakfast . When the young boy got up he seen his breakfast sitting there so he ate it . He heard someone coming up the stairs so he tried to hide but Mr Frank was so good at finding people he found the little boy .He asked him if he had been here long and he replied :yes: the young boy asked that there was a strange box making a funny noise . Tommy asked if he opened the box and the young boy said :no: the young boy agreed to open it. Two weeks later they decided to open the box. Tommy went to open the box but the box was to hot for his hands . So he put on a pair of gloves but it was still to hot so he tried to find a pair of fireproof gloves and lucky he still had a pair from when he worked with the fire brigade DANIEL

 

 

 

Self Evaluation ~The Magic Box

 

Yes I enjoyed writing The Magic Box but also made a few mistakes

I thought the part when Tommy takes a fit

I thought the bits were exciting when they tell you about the homeless boy

I liked the bit when it tells you about the homeless person

Yes because it tells you where it happens and when it happens it was a bit simple to follow the story

 

 

The A type of student is patient and caring and does no sweaing,he or she is nice to each other

and the teacher who is like their mother,

The a type of student is mature and cool

and does not act a fool!!

 

The A type classroom is always fun and play ,

You work with your friends and work out sums,

It is open and free ,

you and me,

The teacher is fun and happy with laughter,

So I weant the A type classroom.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Me and my friend Daniel have made an imaginative story called Computer Madnes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

narator,                Daniel and Josh are computer geegs but they only have one computer to share. They always fight over it and one time it got violent.

 

josh,                       I want on the computer so give give me a shot or ill cry and tell mummy.

 

 

 

daniel,                        No I still have fifteen minutes left anyway.

 

 

 

 

narator,                        Their mum came in and saw them hitting each other.  She splitt it up and sayed no one goes on the computer until you resolve it and she put them in the kichen.

 

 

josh,                              I will let you on the computer until im back from school.  Agreed.

 

 

 

 

 

daniel,                             I agree to that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

daniel,                               You get on the computer until thirty minutes till bed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

josh,                                I agree as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

narator,                            Im proud boys.                     

    

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                Samorost

 

 

 

There is a new game that we have found and I think that is alright  but I am still getting the hang of it.Other people in our class like Thomas,adam Jamie and sean all get the hang of these things very quickly.What it really is about is a little guy who ha to save his own little planet and there is another planet trying to destroy his own planet.On one of the missions you have tobe careful that you dont get killed by the sloth.