Magic Box

 

CHAPTER 1

 

At the back of a creepy dark big tree there was a big big house with trees growing round it. It was about 200 years old. It was a big creepy house. About 2 years ago an old man and old woman moved in the big big creepy house. They had moved in and the old man had slipped down the stair. He nearly broke his leg but he just twisted his ankle. There was a secret key for the front and the back door. Nobody could find it . The door was just made out of wood it was the side door the door was black and white with black red stripes going through the top of it . It look very very scary. It has a big circle handle on it. The handle was balck and red with white stripes on the top of it. They found the secret key at the back of the pine drawers. The only thing they can think of it opens the side door. They used the secret key to open the side door. Then they opened the side door and they saw a masive box with jewels on the front of it . It looked a very very old box. It had a door to it and a big big big big gate as well and it had huge lock to it.

 

CHAPTER 2

 

When he saw the key he opened the box. When he opened the box a big lion pocked its head out. It was brown and white. The old man and old woman were scared of it. They phoned there granddaughter sophie and said we have a box and do u want it. She asked wats in it the old woman said well there is a real lion in itrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa she said I dont really like lions sorry so i dont want it .They said ok then darling dont worry about it then hunnie. So they said bye to each other on the fone then they hung up. They thought about where to put the box. The old man went hhhuuu I know we could put it in the back garden if you want. The old lady said ok then.

 

The Magic Box self Evaluation

Yes I enjoyed writing the story.

The bit I thoght was particulary good was when I told you about the magic box story.

Well I think my story was kind of boring and easy to read and now i am going to tell you a sentance about my boring and easy to read story.

Its easy to read because people can read it better.

In some parts I think its boring.

I thought the best part of it was when i told you about the box.

I am pleased with the begining because I wrote it well I think.

my story is simple to read.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                      Angela

 

This a story about Angela .She gets up to lots of mischeef.When we went in to the hotel.Me and Daniel got something to eat .Then me and Daniel went on a bike cycle .So both off us said why dont we go for Jim and Angela to come a bike cycle with us we will go down the nig massive hills at the shop but one thing we have to wanch so we dontfall of our bikes.I have a big pink bike,Angela has a purple bike,Jim has a blue and white bike.I liked Angela`s bike the best i wish my mum bought me the bike.Member tomorrow we are all going to a football match i said are all of you aloud.It starts at eleven o`clock.i want to go home now for my bed because the game starts at eleven o`clock but i am leaving my house at ten thirty-five.So i can be there in time and so im not late.Im going in now see youse tommorrow come for me at 10 .00 please .I went in to my house i got a bath and then when i came out i dried my hair.My mum offerd me some toast i said yes please mum .She put my toast on after i had finished drying my hair .My mum shouted your toast is ready connie i shouted 1 minute i ran down the stairs the eat my toast io enjoyed it.When i was finished it i said night night mum i will see you in the morning .So i went up to my bed and fell asleep zzzzzzzzzz.Iwoke up the next morning  i said oops the football so i ran down the stairs and then brushed my teeth and washed my face.When i had done that i went up the stairs to put on clothes.The door just ding donged i said oops theres my friends at the door so i let them in untill i done my hair .I was already now so i shouted up to my mum and said bye love you lots .

 

          So we all headed up to the football pitch it was just abput to start .We all sat down with our snack .We said to to the manager how long is this on for the manager said two hours We reaped TWO HOWERS thats quite long .I said i think we should leave half way is that ok wif youse Danielle said yes if all of youse want to leave half way through it .We sat down and watched the game for a little while then i said do all of you want to leave now .All of us said yes ok then lets snak out ok then lets go .This big tall man came and said where are youse little ones going .We said nothing so we just ran away from him............................

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                    ALWAYS WANTED A BUNNY !!!!!!!

 

 

One day on april the 8th the little girl was called Anna and she always wanted a bunny for easter because all her friends had a rabbit.That night before easter she went through the livingroom and said " please can i have a bunny . "

 Well who is going to clean it and go out and play with it with it because me and your dad cant we will be at work all day and you will be at the after school club ,said mum then she   

 Well who is going to clean it and go out and play with it with it because me and your dad cant we will be at work all day and you will be at the after school club ,said mum then she  .So she went to her bed and fell asleep  dreaming about bunnys .It was easter when she woke up and ran through to  mum and dads room and there was no bunny.She felt very very sad but she got easter eggs but her mum realies she realy want that bunny so her mum said ok then you can have a bunny.So she had her breakfast and got changed and got in the car.Mum mum i cant belive it i am getting bunny sssssssssshhhhhhhhhh i know you are getting a bunny so tell me what coulour of bunny do you want ??? well i dont really know yet because i have not seen them.So they came out of the car then they went in to the petshop and seen all of the bunnys .She went wow wee look at all of them mumma there is to much to choose from mum i like that one over there eating a carrot i would like that one please mum just get me it ok then darling i will  let you get it only if you look after it ok  YES MOTHER I WILL  thank you .I will go and get the lady to go in and get you it  .So she went to get it so i was really exited. So they got out of the car and tain the bunny in the car in a little cage all of annas friends said whats thtat in ur little box anna said a little baby rabbit they all said aawwww  thats so cuite.They went in the house and then let the bunny out of the box it was running all around the house Anna invited chloe in the house and then they tain it up the stairs they got home at 7 30 at night Chloe had to go in at 8 30 but my mum offerd Chloe to stay with Anna tonight so Chloe phoned her mum and said ac n i stay with Anna tonight well if you want yes ok i will.Her mum said i will bring your clothes around by the way mum Anna got a bunny today she said aww is it cute .they tain the rabbit up the stairs and then the tain it on Annas bed they where so exited.It fell asleep for a wee while  because it was coming on 9 00 at night so me and Chloe fell asleep it was going to be easter tommorrow i will have to get an easter egg for you Chloe.I said do u think the bunny will lay a golden  egg Anna said no .We woke up the next morning and there was a golden egg lying next to it Anna woke up and she Woke up Chloe

 

  Rachael and Connie play

 

Narrator)Caitlin and Chelsea sit next to each other in maths and Chelsea ofter gets stuck with her maths work.Chelsea asks Caitlin for her help.Caitlin always helps Chelsea.Then one day Caitlin and Chelsea fell out and Caitlin never helped Chelsea that day.They are now ready to negotiate.

 

 

Chelsea)Caitlin can you please help me with my maths work.

 

Caitlin)Yes Chelsea i will help with your work get out your pencil.

 

Chelsea)Caitlin i don`t have one today can i please borrow one of yours.

 

Caitlin)Yes of course will this one be ok.

 

Chelsea)Yes that one will be brilliant.

 

Caitlin)How are you getting on with your work now.

 

Chelsea)I`m kind of stuck and you will not help me.

 

Caitlin)I have been helping you for ages i am trying to get on with my own work.

 

Chelsea)Well can you not just help me for one more question.

 

Caitlin)No i am trying to do my own work.

 

Chelsea)Fine then don`t help me.

 

Caitlin)Fine then give me my pencil back.

 

Chelsea)Fine then here you go.

 

Caitlin)Go and get my pencil now.

 

Chelsea)No because it`s not mine.

 

Caitlin)So you threw it and that is my property.

 

Chelsea)Do i care no i don`t ok so going get it yourself now.

 

Caitlin)I am going to tell the teacher because you threw my property.

 

Chelsea)Well i`m angry with you.

 

Caitlin)I don`t care you shouldn`t have threw it.

 

Chelsea)Well you wouldn`t help me with my work.

 

Caitlin)I don`t care i was trying to get on with my own work.

 

Chelsea)Well you always said you would help me.

 

Caitlin)Well you need to try things for yourself.

 

Chelsea)I do but the answer is always wrong.

 

Caitlin)Well the teacher could help you.

 

Chelsea)She never helps me all she says is just try it again.

 

Caitlin)Well that is not very nice.

 

Chelsea)It`s not my fault.

 

Caitlin)Ok fine i will help you.

 

Chelsea)No because you never helped me when i asked you the first time.

 

Caitlin)Do you want to be friends again.

 

Chelsea)Ok then lets be best friends forever.

 

Caitlin)Ok lets never fall out again.

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                THE END!!!!!!!!!!!