hello easter bunny
John was excited about the day tommorow as it was easter tomorrow .So that night he went to bed after his supper which was a creamy yogurt then at about 9 pm at night he woke up. He had heard a thumping noise, he went down the stairs half asleep and saw a fluffy tail sticking out from under the sofa at the wall he looked behind the couch and there was the easter bunny curled up in a ball lying there afraid to move he said hello and to his surprise it talked back to him please dont tell anyone you saw me and ill give
Recently we used an unfinished story about a bushfire out of a textbook and made an ending for it. We could choose an ending from the book like the children get saved by a man, one of them die,they get saved by an alien spaceship or the fire gets put out by the rain.Mine and seans story used the alien ending.
Narrator: Two boys James and Adam are argueing about who can go on the computer to go on their faveourite game runescape.
James: I have loads of important things on runescape.
Adam: No your a noob I could OWN you with my rune long.
James:I want to get my levels up!
Adam: I need a granite maul though.
James:I only have 30 strength.
Adam:Ha i have 48 strength.
James:We could have half an hour each.
Adam:Ok deal.
Magic box
Jimmy, Robbie and John were all brothers. Jimmy had dark hair and wore dodgy checkered shirts. Robbie had blond hair and he wore Man United football strips. Last but not least was John he he was shy and was always the 1 who was picked on. He had brown hair and he wore a hooded top and jeans. One wet Saturday afternoon Robbie decided to play football in the living room. He ran a riot then ... BANG!!!!!!!!!! the ball hit
My opinionI thought it was fun to write the story.I like the start of my story. These are my describing words for my story exciting, well written and thrilling. I think the best bit is the beginning.I am pleased with the beginning.I think the storyline is easy to follow.
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